I edited it chapter 1 to 5 using Grammarly, I know it won't fix everything, but this is the best I can do, for now. I hope to get better as I keep writing and improving I know it may get frustrating to suffering through my grammar and trying to enjoy the story, yet even then got you and the other people to still keep reading brings joy to my heart thank you for your honest review thank you for reading my story and I hope to get better at my grammar and even meat the smallest of your expectation all the best