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_James_Jones_
_James_Jones_Lv54yr_James_Jones_

there are many things I don't like about this story Hshsjdjdjdkxkxkzjsjsjajsjxjzhxjddjjdjdhdjdjdhdhdjdjfjdjdjssjdjdjdjrjjfrjrjfjtjjttjjfjfjfjfjjfjfjfjfjfjfdjjdfnfnfnfjfnfjxjdjdjfjdjdjcjcjcjcjcjfjfjjcfjjfjdjddjjdjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjgjfjrkrjekdjdjddnjdcfjjfjrjrjtjjtjtjtjfjfjf

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bilu619
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Plz tell me You could help me improve

bilu619
bilu619Authorbilu619

Is it the daylong? Is it the cines? Do they drag on too much Is it the seting Is it charicter drive Is it the tone Do you not lkie the flow of the sotory Well at least i know it not my engrish i am like the second best enfrish speker in my hous after my dad I am like a maistro the ingrish language ho is blind So pray tell fred and ease your heart For i am here nomater the time of date

bilu619
bilu619Authorbilu619

Is it the daylong? Is it the cines? Do they drag on too much Is it the seting Is it charicter drive Is it the tone Do you not lkie the flow of the sotory Well at least i know it not my engrish i am like the second best enfrish speker in my hous after my dad I am like a maistro the ingrish language ho is blind So pray tell fred and ease your heart For i am here nomater the time of date

mow
mowLv4mow

Ok? why the hell even bother leaving such a useless review, point out what you don't like so you can atleast help the author out. just saying you don't like something and keeping quiet about it helps no one.

Reimoss
ReimossLv13Reimoss

Why don't you reply to the other useless reviews? There are plenty of them. Oh yeah.... Right, those have 5 star ratings so it's ok. You disgust me m8.

mow:Ok? why the hell even bother leaving such a useless review, point out what you don't like so you can atleast help the author out. just saying you don't like something and keeping quiet about it helps no one.