Not good
Not recomended
Lots of illogical thinking from the mc
Frustrating to read if you read iy seriously but you can binge read it for fun if you want to spend time
Tanks for your honest thoughts
I wil try to improve
I have re rewritten it againr plz check it out and tell me what you think about it now
Be honest as you want anything is helpful in my eyes
Tank you again
And all the best to u
Tanks for your honest thoughts
I wil try to improve
I have re rewritten it againr plz check it out and tell me what you think about it now
Be honest as you want anything is helpful in my eyes
Tank you again
And all the best to u