Review Detail of amaturewriter in Story of a Dimension Traveling Wizard

Its cool..well written and legible..but it has no selling point..ie: same as other fanfics..mc in anime world with memories..try to do something different like an AU or just give MC some interesting powers....try to keep this happy..OP MC..one man army..add some romance and fluff but pls built it..if harem keep it small...also save ultear..I feel bad for her...Also BASH the **** out of some characters..[its fun] worlds: bleach [100 yrs or plus before cannon]...one piece a few years before cannon...some Chinese novel?....harry potter [before cannon-like harrys parents time...go **** up hogwarts and voldy and dumbles..try to save snape...always felt bad for the cunt].. .GOODLUCK AND GOODSHOW