Review Detail of EidenSensei in The Two-Faced Duchess

(Btw this is a review up to chapter 8 and I love that you admit to your grammar mistakes.) In chapter 1, I love the detailed dialogue, an amazing way to open your story, by the way. In the next few chapters, somehow I fell even more in love with the MC's personality, there's a lot of grammar mistakes, but, if you read the chapters slowly you might be able to find them. (Sorry for my sucky advice/review and sorry I couldn't be more of help.)