I have MTL'd this to 500+ chapters and granted it's MTL, I believe I didn't lose much. I believe that there is a limit to how much an author can overpower their characters but there seem to be no limit in this story. First, the girl seems to have some sort of supernatural vision that can allow her to even see the cells in the body and also see through solid objects. Apparently, because of this power and extremely high mental abilities, she is an extraordinary person at only 17. She is richer than god, can fight better than anyone, her medical skills are out of this world, she is the most wanted mercenary with the highest bounty in the world, she is a hacker extraordinaire, she is a killer extraordinaire, she has the power to move armies and even governments...etc. At this point, I wonder if there is any use for anybody else in this novel. It should just be her and a bunch of her clones.
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I couldn't help it because I was too exasperated. I like OP MC's but even then, there should be a limit especially because this is a romance story. The ML also needs to have his own merit but in the MTL, the FL often hack to find out about his army missions, and then found a way to interfere and 'save' him. She should already know that the guy did not die from a mission in the previous life which shows that he is capable but she still interferes in his career. That's why as I say that the story should be just her and her clones since she is so capable.
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Who needs a ML when you could just date your own OP clone?
Muthoni_Murira:I couldn't help it because I was too exasperated. I like OP MC's but even then, there should be a limit especially because this is a romance story. The ML also needs to have his own merit but in the MTL, the FL often hack to find out about his army missions, and then found a way to interfere and 'save' him. She should already know that the guy did not die from a mission in the previous life which shows that he is capable but she still interferes in his career. That's why as I say that the story should be just her and her clones since she is so capable.
Mtl?
Machine translated language.
yanyan54:Mtl?
Yeah you could go to mtl.com if you want to read in advance but it can really break your brain sometimes. Since it's machine translated, the grammar is not really good. But if you want to understand better you can wait for the translated ones here.
yanyan54:Mtl?
true, Im still around 200+ chapters and although I like the story but the OP things like the supernatural stuff kind of makes no sense and out of context to the story lol. I'm kind of particular with details and information when reading stories and the realistic context of the story especially since this is a modern day settings and not a cultivation genre so when the supernatural powers are mentioned without any explanation beforehand whatsoever, it kind of makes my enthusiasm in reading this story went down a bit and I'm kind of contemplating whether I want to continue reading it or not. It's still entertaining for now I guess, but since they said it's 3k chapters, I don't think I can continue reading it if the MC is so OP like you said. But let's see, lol
this one's an interesting review. though i have apprehensions reading this novel, I'd still give this a go but i thank the commenter for an honest feedback. we have diff preferences but i kinda agree with your last point, when the FL or ML is super extra ordinary, the rest of the characters will just be mere accessories or part of thr background. i hope future stories would have more relatable or believable characters 😁
