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William_ShipleyLv14yr
2021-02-11 05:55

This a fantastic story with a great plot, character development. The only thing I wish that he put a littlie paragraph of the prospective of Inku so we could see what's she think of but that's my only gripe all in all its an great story.

AU Villain Deku

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The amount of thought in this novel shocks me, I thought it was going to be a generic dark Mc Fanfic. I was wrong. Though I don't really like the cover photo for the book, that is my only reservation. Yes it is a dumb reason, but that is how nitpicky I have to be to throw shade on this novel. Aside from obvious grammar and regular vocabulary this is an amazing novel~ Give it a quick read and try to enjoy it as much as possible. I managed to instantly fall in love with it.

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finally a novel with a real villain deku ....................................................................................................................................................................................

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