Nice story! One of the few stories I have read with such descriptive writing. I love the prose! I wish I also could write like how you create and draw up the scenes, well as a novice writer I think I lack descriptive writing yet, but by your story and great prose with a fascinating plot, I got inspired by it to improve my writing quality. Nothing to say about the grammar. I'll keep an eye on this story because as I said, its one of the few stories that inspired me. Love the characters! I love everything! I'll gladly say I had such a great reading experience!
Valence_Lao
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