Review Detail of ShuraTheDestroyer in DXD: Golden King of Lucifer [COMPLETED]

Writing Quality: 2/5 The story is little readable, but it has a lot of grammatical errors and the writing is very "childish". Stability of Updates: 5/5 The update rate is actually very good. But it has so many chapters one after the other, and for that reason the chapters are few worked and have zero development. Story Development: 1/5 The development of the story is just too bad, it's really horrible. It is basically the canon history with an extra character(the mc) , which does not change the original story at all. The story progressed very fast, it has a lot of time-skip, but the story itself has zero evolution and development. He saves people like:Akeno and her mother and lets them follow the canonical course, the only one that changes and that her mother is alive now. The same can be said with Shirone and Kuroka, nor does it make sense that he saved them, since they have exactly the same fate as the canon. Character Design: 2/5 He managed to keep a little of the personality of the original characters, but the OCs, like the MC he created, has zero development. The MC itself is the worst character in the story itself, he basically has a body that can't resist his power and just keeps on gaining more power and skills. He's only 12 and he's just dating a goddess, who basically agreed to date him in 1 chapter! It only took 1 fucking chapter for her to fall in love with him! Zero development with these characters. Not to mention the MC's personality (he looks like a door, a one-dimensional character, his interactions and that of any character does not pass any emotion). This mc continues in the same way as the first chapter so far, he is already OP, but the author still says that his body cannot take all his power (so why give him so much skills?), And he makes no difference in the story, taking him out of history will not make any difference. A simply generic character with no depth or development at all, besides acting like a child, he was simply bribed with a snack! WTF! And he also acts like a retard, even in the logic of thought! World Background: 1/5 The author did not even make a point of explaining or expanding the world already created in the original material, he even quotes develops wrong things already mentioned and explained in the canon. Anyway. If you like a childlike character and act like an idiot, a story with zero development, and characters without emotions in the interactions or a dumbass mc. A super OP mc that still looks weak. This is the type of story for you, otherwise don't even read this story! Sorry. English is not my first language