I really enjoyed the 4 chapters you provided us , albeit a littpe bit rushed in my opinion , but even then i can clearly see how the Mc has "healed" himself with his new family and has grown to love them . The writing itself is pretty good and i didn't see a lot of errors ( or i didn't notice them , my english is mainly self-taught ) I really hope you don't drop this fanfic , it holds a lot of potential and can clearly blossom into something really good MC X widowmaker for the win
Yautja
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