Story is more realistic approach to relationships as of chapter 12. Many of the girls have fallen for the main character's friend. However what ensues seems to the mc stealing waifu's off of the friends harem. Over all the world is nothing special with barely any time describing it( seems to be classic modern world) The characters have some personality but seem a bit forgettable at time. Writing quality is good, the update stability in this opening segment seems good. So far the plot has not had any super obvious plot holes, just wish it had some more cute moments.
bigbear51
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LIKEThank you for the review. I understand that some characters don't really stand out. I still feel that way while writing chapter 21 right now, which as far as I'm aware you haven't reached yet. So sorry if that disappoints. I guess I probably should've limited the number of characters for screen time purposes. I also want to add, in case this is the type of story you're looking for, that I'm not planning on having the mc steal the waifus. I have plans for new girls that show up that become part of mc's harem. Which when I think about it now, might contribute to my too many characters problem. Anyway, I'm just wanted to say that for anyone that might read this review to not get their hopes up that this is waifu stealing type story.
That makes more sense to me. Though I don't think that's the route I'm going with, when I look at what I've outlined so far to myself. That is an interesting concept though.
Lost_Turtle:Stealing WAIFU'S was my attempt at stating that characters that had thought they loved someone but seemed to be going in a direction of seeing a more open romantic field. ( aka noticing otaku boi is not a terrible second option)
bigbear51:That makes more sense to me. Though I don't think that's the route I'm going with, when I look at what I've outlined so far to myself. That is an interesting concept though.
What I've wrote so far is basically guy gets blackmailed to help some girl get with another guy. As the story's progressed he get caught up with the other harem members and their supporters despite being a loner. I hope that helps.
Meowzard:Please give me a short synopsis what’s your book about, I’m totally lost what it’s happening.
bigbear51:What I've wrote so far is basically guy gets blackmailed to help some girl get with another guy. As the story's progressed he get caught up with the other harem members and their supporters despite being a loner. I hope that helps.
I was inspired by Oresuki. But I'd say the concept is probably closer to Toradora. Just that the girl isn't helping the mc as well.
Reikana009:Do you use the same concept as anime Ore Wo Suki Nano Wa Omae Dake Ka Yo
I actually thought this is a waifu stealing novel and wasn't gonna read but after your comment, I will at least try it.
bigbear51:Thank you for the review. I understand that some characters don't really stand out. I still feel that way while writing chapter 21 right now, which as far as I'm aware you haven't reached yet. So sorry if that disappoints. I guess I probably should've limited the number of characters for screen time purposes. I also want to add, in case this is the type of story you're looking for, that I'm not planning on having the mc steal the waifus. I have plans for new girls that show up that become part of mc's harem. Which when I think about it now, might contribute to my too many characters problem. Anyway, I'm just wanted to say that for anyone that might read this review to not get their hopes up that this is waifu stealing type story.