Review Detail of Hocolate in Reincarnated in Star Wars The System

I hope this is not a bad fanfic and will be dropped in chapter 50 above, writing quality is good. Update are not too fast with a slow storyline and the last background of the MC world is like a mental essay by an 11-year-old child, I hope that as the story of MC grows up (this is better done, because writing novels needs to be developed)