Review Detail of Lliono in Reincarnated in Star Wars The System

It's not a bad fic. It has good grammar and has a somewhat balanced system. It follows canon very closely, the only qualitative change so far is Shmi being rescued, though that hasn't really changed anything else. With the bounty hunting tag I was hoping for a bounty hunter fic like the mandalorian, but this is sadly not it. This is more of a "si-follows-the-main-cast-fic" as they go through canon. You can see some hints that the author can write more freely and I hope the author dares to spread his wings and fly outside canon.