My only gripe is the mc he seems to be the type scared of his own shadow. But hes not a cowerd from what the story shows. As such I hope he matures more. On a separate note once maul is done in i hope he takes the bastards ship....
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LIKEof course this story has my attention and I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter. see I don't mind the character sense its in the beginning stages of the story I consider it a character flaw and that's a good thing. A perfect character is no fun to read after all personally. I take as him needing time to mature after all
Gray_stone3:Thanks for the honesty! Hope you keep reading.