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HocolateLv44yr
2020-02-23 03:43

I hope this is not a bad fanfic and will be dropped in chapter 50 above, writing quality is good. Update are not too fast with a slow storyline and the last background of the MC world is like a mental essay by an 11-year-old child, I hope that as the story of MC grows up (this is better done, because writing novels needs to be developed)

Reincarnated in Star Wars The System

Gray_stone3
4.5
25 Chs

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neobenmike
neobenmikeLv5

Writing quality is good, story development is somewhat cringy with creepy pedobear vibes, character design sucks specially with the mc, mc is cringy and a creep. Another system with a mind of its own fic with wank fic tone

4yr

InterPlanarGod
InterPlanarGodLv13

It's Grade-A delicious story. get ittttt 140characters140characters140characters140characters140characters140characters140characters140characters140characters140characters140characters140characters

4yr
Lliono
LlionoLv4

It's not a bad fic. It has good grammar and has a somewhat balanced system. It follows canon very closely, the only qualitative change so far is Shmi being rescued, though that hasn't really changed anything else. With the bounty hunting tag I was hoping for a bounty hunter fic like the mandalorian, but this is sadly not it. This is more of a "si-follows-the-main-cast-fic" as they go through canon. You can see some hints that the author can write more freely and I hope the author dares to spread his wings and fly outside canon.

4yr
KingMichaelVii
KingMichaelViiLv1

It is a very well thought out story and the character feel realistic and intresting and bounty hunting seems cool and i am sure it will only get better can't wait for more.Thanks Author

4yr
Gray_stone3
Gray_stone3Author

Reveal spoiler

4yr
VornX2
VornX2Lv5

I am still waiting for an update. This is my favourite starwars fanfic of all time. I really hope author pick it up again. i need more of this. More please

2yr
VornX2
VornX2Lv5

Please restart this. I really enjoyed how the story developed. It is very refreshing and almost tailored for me. I need more. Maybe this is the only Starwars fanfic i enjoy.

3yr
GoldenApe
GoldenApeLv3

The story is amazing and I sincerely hope the author will finish this. Most other Star Wars SI’s are people either 1. Being a heartless evil bastard or 2. Being a dense goodie two shoes. However this characteristic a perfect example of if a real person was in Star Wars.

4yr
Mark_Kieran
Mark_KieranLv4

I am really enjoying your story and I do kinda want cain To end up with shimi just for anakins reaction I hope you have cain vist koraban any way keep up the good work

4yr
Henrion
HenrionLv4

This is very well done. Great writing quality, but I might just be saying that because half the authors on this site can barely form an English sentence. The self insert fits in with the other characters well and the story development is pretty good. The power balance of the universe hasn't been completely ****ed yet. I've been enjoying this novel, so far. I look forward to reading future chapters.

4yr
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