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Cloudelka
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Novel rather pleasant to read, a little disappointed on some point. 1. We have several information that the game world is a real world, but this is still too vague and no one is really asking the question IRL or IG (How some npc detects its real age and real life, how gods know their real names, why the creator of the game has an aura of a god, why magic exists in real life, ....) 2. The romance progresses strangely without too much information, one day Andranora is rejected by the MC, the day after sleeps in her bed with transparent clothes and a week later pleasures her sexually (but no penetration because she has a hymen too powerful because Andronera is level 14 legend and have a too high defense :') ) And later poof, Andranora pleasures her "orally I suppose, because still not possible to break the defense" and poof Viviane arrives and they make love because Viviane don't have any defense, wtf, how did they arrive there? Same goes for the IRL romance, the MC asks the girl's brother to be able to date her, but after that nothing happens and the MC even later thinks that, if he were to date a girl it would be someone the same gender as her, BUT GOES OUT WITH HER AND NOT ANOTHER !!

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GrandpaPeng
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True. In "I have a bunch of players on Earth", the players have noticed the effects on their bodies and mind in like, uh, first 20 chapters? Meanwhile here it's literally been over 600 chapters and years for them yet they do not question anything nor they test anything. Even the MC himself isn't logical at all.... where are his brains? Same for their sexual life. Since this novel been a trial I've already written a long comment about how perverted the author must be to connect everything with ***. It was clearly going into 18+ harem. But then again he can't even write a proper love development just as you have said. First he says he won't do it even with Andonara, the next chapter he sleeps with both already. The novel "Black Iron's Glory" has done it way better: not only are all the intercourse with women and MC's actions explained, interesting and logical, these women even bear children for him. Later things get complicated, relations turn sour etc - because he didn't think ahead now all this creates more problems for him while relations go sour. So if you're looking for a life-like harem romance & *** go for Black Iron's Glory. And then you'll laugh your a*s off when the MC gets karma for f**ing these women there and here.