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2020-04-30 08:51

Its a rather average sci-fi world background with a cultivation spin on it. Translation quality is OK, needs some work on grammar and misspelling. The characters are amusing for a while, but the author exaggerates quite a bit during the final portion of Arc 1 with how much of a scoundrel the MC is. He isn't behaving like a villain, he is acting like a shameless retard. The shopping spree he goes on with his system was also uncalled for. Yeah it gets him noticed as OP, but honestly it kills his character growth and possibility for actually putting in hard work for his growth. Every villain is a genius at talent and hard work, its why they grow so fast and become so deadly while the Hero is usually gifted a plethora of powerups and outside help, the villain does it all alone. I want to see him being a real villain. Not just another cookie cutter xianxia face slapper mc. Its not right man.

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I_am_Li_Qiye
I_am_Li_QiyeLv11

Nice review.

ABoringDecision
ABoringDecisionLv1

Really spot on

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