Review Detail of amaturewriter in Naruto's Strongest Shinobi

Its cool...make MC learn sage mode [ie: Snakes..they are cool...master it an become a dragon man?]...then get the jougan? anway just make the MC OP...no stupid retarded MC....add some romance and fluff and do try to build it...pls......if harem keep it small.... Look suggest saying...I always thought it would be cool if MC from hyuga had the kaguya clans bone skill [MC gets it because of BS reason...]....Mc could do some cool ****...hell he could learn thundergod jutsu and mix it with his his bones then just through bones at enemies and telepot there..MC could almost be untouchable,,, Anyway goodluck and goodshow