One word... Amazing! Language-wise is excellent. The terms, actions, emotions and the rest that make the story vivid in my head are wonderfully written. Stability of update🤔 why must I pressure the author on this? As long as I've got a chapter or maybe more each week(😝), I'm satisfied. Characters and their characterization play the most important role here that makes the story going smoothly. The author had successfully made every character important. At first, I thought Kais is the main character or maybe he really is, as everything seemed to get him involved, but not as I read along, anyone could steal the spotlight. That to say my favorite would be everyone..lol. Overall, the plot is beguiling 🤭 enough that it makes me a returnee who will await the next chapter patiently. However, must I say 'witnessing' to me isn't the greatest chapter so far. Which I believe could be just removed and the plot would still make perfect sense. Because, seemed to me this was just a repitition to the previous and the upcoming chapters. Maybe the author is trying to give an emphasis or something, but to dedicate almost a chapter for it is kinda meh. Well, that's just me. Still, this deserves the attention of many which I believe to be soon and not later. 😃
Zyanide100
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LIKEZyanide100:Thank you very much for the review. I'm really glad to enjoyed it. ^^ As far as ch. 6 goes, yes, its personally my least favorite too. Needed to emphasize some particular points with it but it could really use some more spice.