Review Detail of Fishball_22 in Is it Wrong to Build a Bonfire in the Dungeon?

First I want to thank the author for his efforts because writing a story isn't easy at all. I know that so here's my review and take note that it's only based on my opinion. This story is bland, very bland. And it's somewhat forced too. Especially how he took care of Lili, it's very cringe. The mc is also a goodie two shoes idiot . I don't like his personality . Also the mc made Bell become level 2 after only one week of training. A level 4 Minotaur and troll suddenly appeared out of nowhere . sigh , just read it if you still wanted to find out more information