Review Detail of Zyanide100 in The Extraordinary Ordinary (Old)

A lot of what this novel's first few chapters do is build intrigue. MC's powers are explained in detail and while to those who are not familiar with game elements could be a bit overwhelmed by it, those who are familiar with would know that the power he has gotten is pretty sick. It's just very exciting to think of what would happen when he comes in contact with others (gets in a conflict of something else) and has to use his abilities. Also really interesting is the questions of what other character's abilities might be. I like a novel that tries to interest you first and then move to the really fun part and from how this is building up, it might be one of those. You definitely have gained a new reader, sir. Keep up the good work!