Review Detail of TheOneWithBooks in Humanity Online: World Sanctuary

Sorry you felt that way. Could you provide your reasoning? How far did you get? Just want to know what was confusing for future reference!

More like he missed the reading comprehension classes in school. Also judging by his sentences his handle on the use of the English language is quite low. So maybe before giving such low unfounded reviews he should first make an effort to improve his level of English so that he could actually understand what the author has written. You have no idea how happy you make me when reading your story. Not only because it's such an engaging read but also because of the grammar and syntax you use. The level of the English used in a big number of the original novels is so bad it makes my head hurt. I usually close out of a book if there's no improvement in the grammar after the 10th chapter so I am really happy with your novel. Will continue to wait for the next chapters.

Getting very personal?? I am sorry that I have a opinion, you are right to have a opinion too, but it does not need to be personal.

Not really personal. It's just, you wrote that you didn't understand anything. If so, on what basis did you write that the novel is a mess. For me at least, to say that a novel is bad you have to actually understand what you are reading, the characters' thought process or the world around them, or at least what the author is choosing to show us at that moment. And there are a lot of those in the novel. If your problem with the novel is because you can't understand the meaning behind the words in the text than for me you just lack the skill to properly comprehend a text. But if you properly understood what you read and still chose to say that is a mess than by all means properly explain what is a mess in a critical way so that the author can make note of it and improve. That is the point in leaving a review. The problem with I had with your comment is that not that you didn't like the novel. Different people different tastes. But if you're going to leave a bad sounding review at least explain yourself properly. If not than don't leave one at all. That is a personal pet peeve of mine so I might of been quite harsh but I still stand by what I wrote so I won't apologize.

I agree, I have been too harsh with my comment and should leave a proper review when I have time, I will retract my review, thank you for taking time to explain your point, it helped me better understand my own.

you said its not personal then said its a personal pet peeve so you won't apologize 😂😂 sounds personal then no?