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Review Detail of WTSBW in Humanity Online: World Sanctuary

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Absolutely love the story in general really like the main character for a few reasons 1 he is clearly overpowered and it is just accepted i normally really hate when authors desperately try to make it seem like there character isn’t that strong while they clearly are 2 a main character in a vrmmorpg that isn’t a human without being a special ultra exclusive race is very refreshing and somehow makes it more realistic Than about the world and characters I first of all really like the perspective of the development team on what the main character does (cry alot)i had gotten sick and tired of stories where the games creator seemed to either be nonexistent or with no complaints send out 10s of updates a week because the main character keeps triggering expansion packs And somehow while seeming realistic the author is still able to make them seem mysterious who exactly is the genius who set up the company are the “NPCs” really just npcs or are they sentient A.I, Aliens, gods who knows. If there is one part i need to give criticism on then its the coloring of in game things i can still barely accept the item rarity but making Hp blue while stamina green is on step to far also why is it called stamina when its also used for magic shouldn’t it then just be called energy? Oh and how much a stat actually does is also kinda vague in the beginning gaining one or two points seemed to strengthen him alot but its kinda vague how much now with a few 10s of stat points he seems pretty dam strong so what about few hundredths of stat points who knows as i have no clue how much one point has as effect So overall in only the first 50 chapters it has been a story that successfully created a world introduced an intriguing character a mystery to solve and some memorable moments I believe this is and will continue to be an interesting and exciting story and cant wait to read more

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Humanity Online: World Sanctuary

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Wow, thank you so much for this comprehensive, awesome, well-thought out review! I’m so glad you’re enjoying the novel so far, and I greatly appreciate all of your comments, the pros and the critiques! I’ve actually made jokes about changing his HP to green because even I keep forgetting it’s supposed to be blue hahah. Now that I know I’m not the only one who noticed, I might legit change it. Thank you thank you, and I hope to continue keeping you entertained and engaged! :)