Review Detail of Overlord_Venus in Hero Scout

I liked the way in which the plot has been established. Transporting 18 humans from Earth (17 of which were internationally acclaimed criminals) to a fantasy word to sew chaos. Character growth: not much to comment at this point since there's barely 10 chapters to work on. Not much has been dug into the characters. Powerscale: like I said before, with the limited number of chapters, there's not much to base it. But, I liked how the author introduced beings that are beyond God who have their own tasks to do ( and how they are siblings). Another fact I liked here was how these beings weren't portrayed to be omnipotent. They have their shortcomings. Grammar: editing is required. Tenses are all over the place. But I could still understand the story. Action: honestly this is one part that I would advise the author to improve in the short term. The way in which the fight scenes are worded left a lot to be desired. I suggest the author to have a mental reference in his mind as he writes them. Also, during fights, let the focus be on one place ( all wuxia stories employ this method. You can refer to one of them. I suggest 'immortal mortal', it has certain elements in it that might help you) Story: fantastic. It has a fresh feel to it. The mc has a definite objective to strive for since chapter 1 Conclusion: A good read. Definitely one that you can enjoy