Review Detail of Kritiko in Nine Star Burden

I just wanna say: This novel would have been very exciting and pleasant to read if only it focused more on action, adventure, and character development but, oh well, we all have our preferences. If I was younger like 14-17 years old, I think I would, from time to time, like some of the cringe humor in this book. What I like about this book: 1. The translation is pretty smooth. 2. The premise of the story is something to look forward to though not the first of its kind What I don't like in this book: 1. Some translated words are out of context. (Remember, this is a fantasy world and our MC(Jiang Xiao)25yrs old, Transmigrated to the body of Jiang Xiaopi 16yrs old. You'll get what I mean if you decide to read the novel. 2. The story is too slow 3. The forced humor between the interaction of the MC and his older sister is at first fun, then ok, then uninteresting, to being unbearable. Imagine having a wincest and Yuri vibe from beginning til chapter 60. Even during combat, instead of more movements and combat tactics, you'll encounter more dry cheese moments. 4. The MC feels like not an MC but a side character. Even Xia Yan and his sister feels more important as I read the novel 5. MC's character is passive. More like a yes man to me. I can't feel his drive and crave for power at all 6. The novel has no depth and goal. Read at your own risk.