To be honest its not bad, but the MC really has no consequences for any of his actions, he does things on a whim which i dont think gives the story much depth, if your reading this story for the sex scenes then yeah its great albeit not very detailed, but to be honest at some point the sex overpowers the story making it all fall flat, unless sex is a major mechanic in the story then the MC shouldnt be doing it so much
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