Review Detail of Eluka12 in My Harem Empire

Item: My Harem Empire
Rating: 3.8

Review detail

Eluka12Author4yrEluka12

I am not going to be so shameless to rate my own novel full stars... I will grade it how I see fit. writing quality 3. needs work... stability updates 5. I release every day! story development 4. could use a lot more work! Character design 4. I make each character unique! world background... this is a hard one I rate it 2 and a half if I could... I need to work on that!

My Harem Empire

Eluka12

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PripririLv5Pripriri

You didn't change anything at all.. Mc is still stupid and pathetic

4yr

G0D1YLv5G0D1Y

Yoshida has his own charm... a truly broken character that made women wet, sadly, because of this, the 'mc' could only be dwarfed and appear pathetic in comparison. If there was a change, maybe it would have been great, however you copy/past the whole thing making your novel lose its originality...

4yr

Eluka12AuthorEluka12

How is it a copy and past? lol It is different. Yoshida is a bi-tch Lucas is not. Lucas fights for what his, Yoshida gets the girl's to fight for him... Yoshida does not make his own choices, Lucas does! The girls got to beg Yoshida to do them...

4yr

Yuri_is_NtrLv5Yuri_is_Ntr

Girls got to beg Yoshida to do them - sounds way better, then intended. Reversed would be - Lucas beg girls to do him- hahaha, damn even if that wasn't intentional, it's still fun.

Eluka12:How is it a copy and past? lol It is different. Yoshida is a bi-tch Lucas is not. Lucas fights for what his, Yoshida gets the girl's to fight for him... Yoshida does not make his own choices, Lucas does! The girls got to beg Yoshida to do them...

4yr

Malcolm_MasseyLv13Malcolm_Massey

Dropped?

Eluka12:How is it a copy and past? lol It is different. Yoshida is a bi-tch Lucas is not. Lucas fights for what his, Yoshida gets the girl's to fight for him... Yoshida does not make his own choices, Lucas does! The girls got to beg Yoshida to do them...

4yr