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amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv44yr
2020-02-13 21:45

Its interesting do doubt BUT the SI..MC has no knowledge..the MC isnt even OP [even though his parents are beings able to destroy a planet by just releasing their aura-chp 3 was mentioned I think...so yah,,,,,even at base the child of such a being should be well beyond mortal capabilities..like maybe almost as strong as Yami..or atleast half his power at a young age] and it seems that the other characters too will be strong [if others are as strong as MC then it becomes boring]...moreover the character development is.....well...almost like love and first sight...ex: MC magically becomes better looking and love interest falls in love or develops crush...so yah..kinda ****ty.. Though it was a dope idea but its executed badly

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ForcedToWrite
ForcedToWriteAuthor

Hahahaha 🀣, thank you, this is just the beginning so the story hasn't developed yet, but thanks for giving a review 😎

50ShadesOfAss
50ShadesOfAssLv14

Wow thanks for the comment. The synopsis is so crap, it doesn’t tell us about the story

DragonkingKyo
DragonkingKyoLv6

who is the love interest?

amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

YOUR MOM!!!.....nah just kidding..so far it was the sister..the one asta previously had a crush on

DragonkingKyo:who is the love interest?
Aklyf
AklyfLv5

So not being OP is still OK but will MC will be pushed around by everyone (I hope it's not that kind of novel like Xiainxia novels)

Aklyf
AklyfLv5

So not being OP is still OK but will MC will be pushed around by everyone (I hope it's not that kind of novel like Xiainxia novels)

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