Review Detail of Linds555 in 7 Path of the Lilies

The Path of the Lilies is an all encompassing story. Although there are a few grammatical errors, it does not detract from the plot. I find myself constantly wondering about the fate of the three children characters. I am pleased with the detail of the world as well as the descriptions of the energy masters, training, and levels that they strive for. The dialogue and character development is fluid and captivating. I plan to support this author in the future. The descriptive quality of the work is worthy of a screenplay. Many thanks to Sorahana for sharing the imagination possessed.