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CailinMatthews
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2020-01-27 10:41

The story begins with the MC as a little girl. The novel will be divided into volumes according to the significant phases in her life. Currently, there are about 14 chapters and I like how in every chapter so far we learn something new and how it differs from info dump. Instead of simply stating all the facts, the writer shows them instead(with the occasional "Ha!" in your face cause the writer loves to surprise the readers and laugh at their demise). Since the MC is just starting her journey, the readers can easily follow with the flow of her story as if they're both discovering the world together. Very nice as always, Sorahana ❤❤❤

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Thank you, Caii ❤️🤗🤗🤗

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Sorahana:Thank you, Caii ❤️🤗🤗🤗
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CailinMatthews
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I hate how I think of more to say AFTER I submitted a review. *smh* Really, Cai. Really? *smh more* As a more in depth review, I'd like to point out how the writer depicts Ye Jiao's journey so well. Not only does she focus on her advancement as an Eon Energy Master but she also writes about her journey in companionship. The story itself embodies different elements in the MC's life and how it impacts her along the way. The balance among these elements are superb. The writing of them also impacts readers effectively. Whether a reader is a loner or an extrovert, he/she will find herself able to relate to Ye Jiao and the other characters. The cast is pact with personalities. No one is complacent or unimportant. They all contribute to the story beautifully—these includes the antagonists (although they seem easy to hate tbh) but if there's anything I learned in the writer's first novel, "Flowers Bloom From Battlefield," is that the younger ones have more chance to grow and redeem themselves. Most of their attitude comes with upbringing. I hope this is tackled later on in the story more when they could decide for themselves rather on relying on others' opinion. The flow of the journey seem to start out slow but the advantage of it is easing readers into the world the story has. The MC is merely a child at the beginning, a phase were she herself is discovering her own world. Her adventure leads her to a number of places and I have no doubt she'll travel more, letting us deeper into the setting. The road ahead of Ye Jiao is still long and I can't wait to be there every step of the way. Only more adventures and milestones awaits!

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