Though i have only read the first chapter, the grammar is so bad that its making me want to stop reading, though i want to read more i just have to stop because of the grammar, the characters like "whitey" who is a sleeping dog in a restaurant definitely was from Gourmet of another world, i want to read more but the grammar is jusstt sooo bad if you improve the grammar i would rate it a five star rating and even give you a vote, you really need to hire someone who can correct your grammatical errors And you might increase in readers
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