I really liked the story, there where some grammar mistakes but over-all it is an amazing story. Loved the character development and the main character too. Please update soon! 🙏

I've read the inspiration for the premise so I'm excited at first to read a Naruto ff with CN elements on it. Unfortunately the execution fell flat and it focused too much on the borrowed idea, instead of using Narutoverse as the main plot. This honestly got boring way too fast because the goal could easily be achieved, and the lack of limit on his powers.

AWESOME I wish for more chapters it was so good I couldn't stop reading it. 10/10

I pretty much loved this story. oh there was about two chapters I hated but it really wasn't after that. I did feel like the author was not aware of just how big the naruto verse actually was but most fan fiction authors really don't pay attention to anything outside the anime itself. I enjoyed the story alot. the main character was fun. started off rocky. but transitioned into a good character. I laughed alot.

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Such a pity he didn't have jutsu upgrade... I remember that one of the enhance specialist genre novel had one of their MC going crazy by writing again and again repeatly on the cultivation technique, with each time he wrote would refine and make the cultivation stronger and better. I forgot the title, but enhancement specialist genre novel shouldn't be a lot... Just Google it... That guy just write the same technique again and again, upgrading it to it's epitome...

I was planning on doing something similar to this. I can already tell you the novel is going to be great. I like the idea of an upgrade system. I hope you continue for a good while making chaps.