Review Detail of Condemned in Rise of the Zombie Apocalypse

Grammar/Writing Quality - great to read and engrossing. Although there were a few mispelled words, slight grammatical error, lack of punctuations, capitalization and etc, it did not bother me that much since the quality of writing is refined. World Building/Character Development - I can't tell with great certainty, but as of ch14(latest ch to this day), characters are not fleshed out that much. I recommend more interaction with subordinates to at least allow us know their basic personalities. Honestly, most side characters feel bland in my opinion.