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SlyOW
SlyOWAuthor4yr
2020-01-21 03:41

So this is the story of Dorian who will get out of his boring life and live through amazing adventures. If you have any critic don't hesitate writing it in the comments or in a review. Try to be constructive please, although I know it can be hard for those whose first language isn't English.

Origin of Evil

SlyOW
4.5
96 Chs

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Draecon
DraeconLv13

This is a great book. I binge read all the current 52 chapters in a day.... >.> as far as the material goes, its edited well enough and has good "drawing skills" (you can picture the events as they happen) im impressed! Very well done!

4yr
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Eddicted
EddictedLv5

This story was really good in the beginnig but started becoming bad eventually.plot armours and cliches are taking over this story that had a good beginning. The charecter of MC seemed to be good in the beginning(clever, decisive, and not insane) but the author is gradually turning him into an idiot who is mainly blessed with luck(plot armour) and the MC is gaining power for no reason. But this is just my opininon. You can read the story and see if you feel the same

4yr

Btchplease
BtchpleaseLv3

Merci pour le roman que tu as écrit , on l'as vraiment aimés et si vous vous mettez à écrire à nouveau on prendras plaisir a lire vos prochains romans . J'écrit ce message en français qui est ma langue d'origine pour montrer mon respect à ton travail. Ps: merci d'avoir répondu a mon message antèrieur .

4yr
OTAKU04
OTAKU04Lv5

It's a pretty nice story with a good premise and good english. But the story has become kind of cliche , but even then it's still nice to read . Just hope the author eases up on the cliches a bit and does not make the mc too op so that there will be room for development. Also it would be nice if the author set up a definite power system, not like those stupid mc's who constantly grow more powerful with no actual top power attainable to be seen, and also none of that bull**** where they do the most bull**** things which do not make sense and then they explain it with it's magic or the power of froendship. All in all i am saying that this is a good novel and you should read it.

4yr
Darvein
DarveinLv4

The story was enjoyable and had a nice premise at the beginning and the next 20 or so chapters. But it slowly developed into the typical overpowered plot armor protagonist story, with many chapters being dedicated to explaining abilities, equipment, needles thought processes and other tidbits with too many descriptors; things that are nice to have in moderation. Regardless, it’s a not a bad story but it’s not the best either, if you enjoy it then good on you.

4yr
Spectral_One
Spectral_OneLv10

Pretty average novel. interesting enough to read, has a few unique elements but nothing out of the world. English is pretty good too. Story devolpment is a ride but slow but in all other case it is average. Not a lot too say about other that it is pretty average. Good for a new writer tho.

4yr
Lucifer4102
Lucifer4102Lv12

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4yr
Daoist347714
Daoist347714Lv3

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4yr
Dark_2
Dark_2Lv5

I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

4yr
mati98akd
mati98akdLv6

Great story, a very interesting beginning, protagonist that attracts you from the first moment and a great writing that makes it possible to enjoy history I will be waiting for more chapters !!!

4yr
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