Review Detail of JustBearmace in The Legend of the Kyubi

I would like to do it but let's say I don't have the tools to do it personally, I don't have an editor and I'm trying to do everything the best I can, that's why I've asked for patience and at the same time, I've warned since the introduction. As far as removing idioms, I don't think it's possible because of the simple fact that the characters in my stories are specifically Japanese, in other words, they have to say such titles by culture. If they were characters from other works such as Marvel, I wouldn't write those idioms because it wouldn't make sense. Thank you very much for reading my story despite all the mistakes.