Review Detail of AceDragon in Equation Zero Battle/Line

this story is decent It has writing mistakes and the author doesn't go back to fix also the author always put something in the middle of the chapter to remind the readers about the world of the equation zero but I don't think they really need it because it's just wasting the chapters spacethe story now is different from the original storyline but Elston it's better but not the best so overall the story is decent at best it can be better if the author goes back and fixes the the writing and stops including things at the middle of your chapter our characters hero Irene Ken and kitsunestarting from hero hero was born at a village where he was with other his other three people his father and his brother and sister but hero was in the a and somebody saved him so the person that saved him he took the goals of that person and made them his own so right now his only goal is to go save people from despair and also go find a girl and supposedly his brother. 410 it was the same as her but way different we don't know much about Campbell we know she was experimented on and she's supposedly a servant like the old story of enforces like hero but she's different her abilities are a normal if she could carry want to pull abilities we don't know much about her and the person that experimented on her but we know it's Mr Hyde who experimented on her and other people Ken's goal is to find the heart to save people the heart is a legend they say the heart was from the heart of God so they think whoever has the heart can save everyone in the worldso Irene she was born in a small village her brother and her other siblings always fought the beasts their father and mother were killed by their beasts no if Irene's brother has more talent than her so right now she want to go join the enforcers even though she didn't get a letter when people get a letter that means they are allowed to join the enforcers and it has to be blue if it's not blue then they're not allowed to join the enforcers the blue card has been given by four people and the four people are connected to master Storm Master storm is the highest ranking person in enforcers the leader. like I said before North has more time than I really so I really went to go join the enforcers even though she didn't get the card so when she tried to join they let her in the only because of North her brother she wants to kill all the beast matcha the light we currently don't know what his goal is to join the enforcers and there is kitsune is gold is to go find his brother Jin Jen is a noble just like his brother kitsune and Jin have a Firefox ability Ken is a seraphim Irene has a ice ability Hero has a light and and dark ability like a angel and demon but combined the story takes things from different animes live one piece and other stuff like Naruto also so the story is decent right now but I'm hoping the authentic fixes the mistakes see me back in the past and also leaves a little chapter sold when people want to go back and see what the story about they can go back to this chapter and see what's about the whole story overall.