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Bored_Raccoon
Bored_RaccoonLv43yrBored_Raccoon

I think this has some potential, but honestly, the grammar mistakes are a major turn off for me. I expect the occasional mistake and/or typo but so far there are too many syntax mistakes. I only read up to chapter 9 so far, will the grammar improve in later chapters? I didn't give a bad grade because I think the author crafted a very original and interesting world background and should he get someone to proof read and fix the mistakes in the early chapters I would truly enjoy this novel.

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Bloodlines of the Ancient Pantheons

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DARK_KNIGHT_
DARK_KNIGHT_Lv15DARK_KNIGHT_

does the writing get better? feel like it has potential, but i just cant read it atm lol

Bored_Raccoon
Bored_RaccoonLv4Bored_Raccoon

I stopped reading, it’s such a turn off for me when a webnovel has awful grammar. Kinda sad because the story was quite interesting.

DARK_KNIGHT_:does the writing get better? feel like it has potential, but i just cant read it atm lol
Ch33sy
Ch33syLv15Ch33sy

Did you seriously write a review after 9 chapters? The author even said in 1st chapter to have some patience about the grammer. Gets alot better pretty quickly and the story after you have read it all is mindblowing good! You are missing out on probably the best novel in here. Yes i've read all 620 chapters🤓

Bored_Raccoon
Bored_RaccoonLv4Bored_Raccoon

Good for you 👍

Ch33sy:Did you seriously write a review after 9 chapters? The author even said in 1st chapter to have some patience about the grammer. Gets alot better pretty quickly and the story after you have read it all is mindblowing good! You are missing out on probably the best novel in here. Yes i've read all 620 chapters🤓
DARK_KNIGHT_
DARK_KNIGHT_Lv15DARK_KNIGHT_

yeah i feel the same lol the concept seems really cool but the writing style and grammar was just too simple, missing a bit of complexity

Bored_Raccoon:I stopped reading, it’s such a turn off for me when a webnovel has awful grammar. Kinda sad because the story was quite interesting.