There goes our author worrying about his English skills, but truth to be told he's a bit better than normal native english speakers. Dag our little protagonist, hope he becomes that Viking op guy, and exploring other aspects. Story's good hope the author not quit the book half way hanging around. Make atleast 300 chapters for us, author kun. And thnx for chapters.
Immanioripse
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LIKEI kind of dont like the aspect how live kids are disposed of like they're not worth anything by xis. It's very wrong and kids are innocent! Also wiping out all Males seems a bit extreme in my opinion. After all not everyone is responsible for the fall of the planet. Finally we are talking about the time when the sun is dying , that's billions of years from now and our planet would have long been dried up before the sun even dies. I also dont understand how humans break the balance of the galaxy when we are only part of a tiny solar system at the end and the galaxy is vast . Even the sun dying wont affect the stability of the milky way galaxy or milky way * Andromeda combined galaxy. So, there are quite a few inconsistencies in the intro. But beside that fact , sounds like a fun action novel
Immanioripse:Thank you! 🗡️
ImmortalAutarch:I kind of dont like the aspect how live kids are disposed of like they're not worth anything by xis. It's very wrong and kids are innocent! Also wiping out all Males seems a bit extreme in my opinion. After all not everyone is responsible for the fall of the planet. Finally we are talking about the time when the sun is dying , that's billions of years from now and our planet would have long been dried up before the sun even dies. I also dont understand how humans break the balance of the galaxy when we are only part of a tiny solar system at the end and the galaxy is vast . Even the sun dying wont affect the stability of the milky way galaxy or milky way * Andromeda combined galaxy. So, there are quite a few inconsistencies in the intro. But beside that fact , sounds like a fun action novel