Review Detail of iceguy in Marvel: The Living Vampire
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so far i like how it is going you slotted your character into the universe really nicely and you didn’t just give him full knowledge of the universe like most which largely ruins the story but gave him something more similar to a premonition than broken memories of the movies he knows people and some about them but he has his own motivations his selfish but not completely he isn’t getting every women he ever sees people dont just forget about his actions im really looking forward to the future of your novel
Marvel: The Living Vampire
MikeyBoy
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Do you think you could explain it with a bit more in-depth? I just wanna know so I can improve on how I do dialogue in the future.
Edenwyther:It's nice, but something was... missing? The flow, the way they converse feels off... I dunno. I just can't seems to enjoy it. I guess that's why they called it fanfiction
MikeyBoy:Do you think you could explain it with a bit more in-depth? I just wanna know so I can improve on how I do dialogue in the future.
Maybe your prayers will be answered because of my boredom brought on by not being able to leave my house.
Guad:Still waiting for a new chapter! T_T
MikeyBoy:Maybe your prayers will be answered because of my boredom brought on by not being able to leave my house.