Review Detail of Kiiara in The Dream Shifter
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Wow, I’ll say it first. Love the MC, Yuki. Though he maybe too timid for me at the beginning but guess that’s how it is for novel like this. Love Yuki cos me too, I’m a daydreamer. Can’t seem to focus and keep my head up in the cloud. So hi Yuki, you got a friend here 😂 Now onto the writing, what I really love from your story is actually your writing style. Your description of an event or an area were nicely done. It made me imagine the scenario in my head easily. Love your rich vocabulary and the smoothness of the transition in the story. The only issue is the paragraph being too dense. It lessens the tension in your story and it’s not so easy in they eyes. But yeah that’s about it I guess and some minor grammar errors which not really affecting your story. It’s still AWESOME 🥳 Keep up the good work author! May your novel appear in the trending list!
The Dream Shifter
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No problem. I love reading original story like this. As fellow authors, thank you for deciding to become a writer. I’m very honored to be able to help encourage other authors 😊
Nightmare_weaver:Thanks for the encouraging words. They mean alot to me. Yuki is in fact unnaturally too timid but its for a reason later revealed in the story. AS for the paragraph issue, I've tried to resolve it in the later chapters but still thanks alot for the super kind words