Review Detail of Chainslock in The Dream Shifter

I am still dipping my toes into the literary fiction pool, finding what works for me and what doesn’t. Turns out, this book works for me! The names of the characters sounded Japanese, and so they gave me Anime-ish vibes (Yuki, Momoko, Saki). The ambiance (how you set the settings) is good, and text is also grammar-wise. Good job! Best of luck in your writing.