Review Detail of RozaCsergo in The Dream Shifter

I can see that you're passionate about writing because this story is well crafted and not rushed. Regarding the text: it has good grammar and it's easy to understand. Regarding the story: The descriptions paint a whole picture in your mind with vivid scenes. And you are immediately introduced to the main character and shown how he is and where he starts his journey. I like how you build up the ML as a character. "The more you write, the better you become," they say, so keep at it. Well done.