it started okay but got very very bad. from inconsistent chapters to time skips to incomprehensible fast paced storytelling. we're told the MC is training a certain technique and just learned it to all of a sudden him having a trump card technique that's stronger than the one he was training in. chapters that are repeated or skipped and the "author" doesn't even try to fix it. then there's chapters from other novels. a lot of chapters first half are the second half of the previous chapter. imagine 10 chapters where the first half is the second half of the previous chapter. you just read 5 chapters but paid for 10. all In all this novel sucks and the total lack of respect and follow through on checking from the author makes this a waste of time to read
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