Ignore the initial stupidness of the Main characters. Everything else after that is almost perfect. I assure you. This is my review as a reader...
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LIKEA hybrid huh... can the unity technique lower the requirement both legacy exercises ? does it have weaknesses like silver, religious symbols etc. once he practice it? will his element or attribute be fire or heat ? will have expectations waiting for your next releases. yeah cool and tnx for the chapter......
Typhlix:Lol, thanks and uhm... U'd be surprised if you read the recent chapter I posted
I like the premise of the story. But the translation quality is just sooo bad. Please find a way to correct this. There are words that don't belong, words missing, unfinished sentences, made-up words that just don't exist. And the structure of sentences is off in general. Please find a way to correct this. I'm at chapter 43 right now and if this is the same for the pay to read chapters then I have to drop this novel. Wich would be a pity because I like it and I would like to keep reading it .
I'm really sorry I spoilt the novel for you π I will surely get an editor. And if you dropped the novel, make sure to check back sometime as it might have already been edited. Thank you !
rolle:I like the premise of the story. But the translation quality is just sooo bad. Please find a way to correct this. There are words that don't belong, words missing, unfinished sentences, made-up words that just don't exist. And the structure of sentences is off in general. Please find a way to correct this. I'm at chapter 43 right now and if this is the same for the pay to read chapters then I have to drop this novel. Wich would be a pity because I like it and I would like to keep reading it .