My opinion is that this is really a gem and that our MC should put more feelings or importance in relationships, both personal and social. I know he is a Marshal and he was in the war all that but now that the world is changing I think it is a good opportunity for him to start changing too. I do not know what you have planned for the future of this novel but I say that our MC can become a good ruler of not saying a country but a settlement with many people in a self-sufficient way. :::::: ...----------- And having a harem if that's okay with you because I don't see at the moment how you would do it with the fickle and fast-sex attitude of our MC --------..... ::::::::::: If you have read all this, I sincerely thank you author and reader. You are a great and you deserve the best.
D_Blackwell
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