Review Detail of BaeVida in The Days When I’m With You

Item: The Days When I’m With You
Rating: 5

Review detail

BaeVidaLv144yrBaeVida

Writing quality, great! Stability of updating, good! Character design great, world background... All great. Now 4 d main review. Love the romance between these two high schoolers. Love the suspense at chapter two.. I like the mischief Airi pulled. Really hope they are ok. Haven't gone far with my reading, but I do love the book. And for that, I have added it to my library. Oh and yes the synopsis doesn't give much details, almost made me not want to read but she had a nice prologue and 1st chapter. Do something about your synopsis, it would attract readers more.

The Days When I’m With You

Kiiara

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BaeVidaLv14BaeVida

This should be the second longest review I have given anyone. If u are on discord, msg me @BaeVida#7167

4yr

KiiaraAuthorKiiara

Thank you for the review! I hope you stay for the next chapters hahaha. Yeah, I was thinking the same thing too. I hv considered changing the synopsis but I'm not really good at it. I'll try to think abt it more though. Thanks for the feedback!

4yr

BaeVidaLv14BaeVida

You'll do great. Well if I can render any hel or suggestion, let me know.

Kiiara:Thank you for the review! I hope you stay for the next chapters hahaha. Yeah, I was thinking the same thing too. I hv considered changing the synopsis but I'm not really good at it. I'll try to think abt it more though. Thanks for the feedback!

4yr

Asterin_SLv3Asterin_S

👍🏻

BaeVida:You'll do great. Well if I can render any hel or suggestion, let me know.

3yr

camilh_CCLv2camilh_CC

Neighbors mifok OTOT pm oyoh po. Lflcas oo-mphe! Pfat pog think thinking bwrds! Nsto pig pugoh pufhat otrat... Mtst? (: 😂

Kiiara:Thank you for the review! I hope you stay for the next chapters hahaha. Yeah, I was thinking the same thing too. I hv considered changing the synopsis but I'm not really good at it. I'll try to think abt it more though. Thanks for the feedback!

3yr