Item: Journey In Harry Potter World
Rating: 1.8
Author: HPMan

HPManLv44yr

2020-02-07 20:24

1) Your MC is super OP. Knowledge about his past life already cheat, but you're still adding more cheats: - Soul Phoenix from owl (it's not pokemon to evolve like that) - Winchester knowledge ( where it came from, if he's normal muggleborn) - OP Artifact Hat - oh, and don't forget this "Magic CORE" **** Anything of this OP by itself, but together... You'll just drop this fan-fic soon, because: 1) it's boring as hell 2) to OP, if he'll not kill Volandemort with all his powers in 3-4 years that's will be really weird. Right now your fun-fic looks like "Cheat Engine".

Journey In Harry Potter World

MfrnA

3.9

25 Chs

Liked by 6 people

Replies3

blooLv14

Super agree. Advice for the author. "Cheats" are okay in most stories, as something to differentiate your MC. Make him stand out from the pack. Harry potter is a bit different though. Just the knowledge of the RoR could make someone determined incredibly OP. It's one of those stories where being an '*****' in a childs body actually gives you a huge advantage, so adding anything on top seriously messes with the scaling. Not to mention there's all sorts of whacky spells you as the author could invent. Maybe your MC runs into a tomb with books from ages ago! All sorts of crazy things.

4yr

Scholar_AssassinLv5

Though he has cheat and potential but still he is not strong enough to defeat Voldemort and as for Winchester knowledge.... He got it from the soul book...

4yr

Farjana_NituLv2

But OP MCs are so goooooddd. I like the way it is....

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I will give you full score coz I hope you will update more in the future. And PLS NO HAREM!!!!!!!!!! LIKE SERIOUSLY!! but overall I love the story so far. Keep going I hope unlike most fanfics with potential you will continue to update periodicly and go beyond at least 80 chapters coz its annoying when this good fanfics stop and are dropped halfway.

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Author: This is my first novel, obviously I'm rating it 5 stars. I hope you like this novel and enjoy it. I need reviews and some suggestions.

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Han234Lv1

Great Harry Potter Fan-Fic , OC MC a Muggle born interesting to see the outcome of it.Enjoying reading the OPness or powerup's in the novel.

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Great story, hope you could do it well... Don't worry, it may not look like a lot of guy and girls reading your fiction in the comment section, but it's not.. There's thousand of people reading it, but they just didn't comment.. So, don't feel down... You still have a lot of fans waiting for new chapter!!!

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