A really good novel. But the sentences "smiled weakly", "smiled bitterly", and "smiled awkwardly" are too repetitive. It would be even better if you can just reduce the "smiling weakly" sentences.
Avidfan
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LIKEThanks for not getting mad at my suggestions. Your attitude to correct your mistakes will take you to great success. I wish you all the best š
Avidfan:Thank you~ I will be mindful of these tips;)