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Review Detail of Darkshadow12 in The Good For Nothing Cultivator

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Darkshadow12
Darkshadow12Lv43yrDarkshadow12

A really good novel. But the sentences "smiled weakly", "smiled bitterly", and "smiled awkwardly" are too repetitive. It would be even better if you can just reduce the "smiling weakly" sentences.

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The Good For Nothing Cultivator

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Avidfan
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Thank you~ I will be mindful of these tips;)

Darkshadow12
Darkshadow12Lv4Darkshadow12

Thanks for not getting mad at my suggestions. Your attitude to correct your mistakes will take you to great success. I wish you all the best šŸ˜„

Avidfan:Thank you~ I will be mindful of these tips;)