Review Detail of DaoistgWJDz8 in Life is a Fairytale [deleted]

Read first 5 chapters, author skipped many parts of the story that would have been interesting such as how the protagonist tried to fit into his new world or who he was before everything changed. Whether it's bad writing or a bad translation of bad writing something is clearly wrong. Some sentences are missing words and make no sense and every chapter has a slew of spelling errors. Advice to author would be to find a good editor that would do wonders for the book