Review Detail of haakuman in The Creed of An Avenger
Review detail
Very disappointing. Was expecting a ruthless MC, looking towards their goal and being smart about it. No unnecessary emotions or interactions. Just straight to the point. MC here is copied out of the anime but made worse, as shown by his unrealistic interactions with others. His unusual trust towards strangers and his lack of emotional control make his background and character inconsistent with each other, contributing to the frustrating experience that this story provides. The sentient system doesn’t help either, as their dialogues continue to show lack of the maturity which is expected from someone who has experienced the extreme levels pain and torture such as him. Not only that, the fact that he chooses to sacrifice himself protecting the people he has known for only a few days clearly illustrates either his extreme naivety or the author’s poor choice of plot points, both of which should not be present in a story such as this. In conclusion, this novel is not for those who dislike unrealistic revenge stories or immature naive protagonists. Anyone who has moved past mainstream anime should probably stay away, as this story will bring you major frustration.
The Creed of An Avenger
IdleLucifer
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You’ve misunderstood. I said everything in the first paragraph as a combined description of what I was expecting. But what was in your novel was similar to the version in the anime. Sure Hajime could be called ‘ruthless’ by some but from my perspective he is just a naive generic edgelord anime main character. He’s got some backbone but with minimal smarts. Also, the fact that it’s your first novel won’t change the main points of my review. Sure it’s good for a first attempt and I wouldn’t say I could write better, but I’m reviewing from the perspective of a reader not a writer so I won’t give a better score just for that. And addressing your comment about my ‘boldness’ to write this review from reading only 17 chapters: 1) I revisited chapter 17 for my review, so I’ve read further in actuality 2) Even by chapter 10 I could tell this novel wasn’t for me through the character interactions. I only pressed on to see if his character would change and from I’ve seen it hasn’t 3) My review is meant for warning those who are like me and may possibly be frustrated with this. You may have taken offense but I was only harsh on words to vent the frustration your novel brings. For me it’s better to hate online than irl.
IdleLucifer:Well, it was my first novel, so those consistencies were to be expected. Also your statement ruthless and copy of original contradicts each other, no? Also this review is pretty bold for someone who only 'read' 17ish chapters.
Hello brother reader, until what chapter did you read, if I may ask, because I am very interested in this novel, but your review left me feeling but if the MC’s personality can mature in the future, then I’ll read it without worry. He doesn't have to be very cruel, but it's also not good to be very naive. So you could say what chapter you read, to at least have a basis on how far the MC will be? This would help a lot.
Hello autor-san, will the MC have these inconsistencies for a long time? I'm just asking why in the case of another reader with the same doubts that I go through this review, I can clarify them soon, thus dispelling his excitement in reading his novel if that problem is only at the beginning of the novel. 😁
IdleLucifer:Well, it was my first novel, so those consistencies were to be expected. Also your statement ruthless and copy of original contradicts each other, no? Also this review is pretty bold for someone who only 'read' 17ish chapters.
I got to around ch50, there’s quite a bit more than that so you can read if you want to see if it gets better
AleccrimD:I apologize if there are many errors in my words, as my mother tongue is Portuguese and I am currently using a translator.
AleccrimD:Hello autor-san, will the MC have these inconsistencies for a long time? I'm just asking why in the case of another reader with the same doubts that I go through this review, I can clarify them soon, thus dispelling his excitement in reading his novel if that problem is only at the beginning of the novel. 😁
haakuman:I got to around ch50, there’s quite a bit more than that so you can read if you want to see if it gets better
